Blackened Salmon
.down by the steaming seawinged pigs cluster on a magmabeach..... flocks of flesh fat vulturessmell decay..... in the dark can't seeanyway born as sharks but grewup too slow..... lost all the...
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I got as far as the children and the bus and my mind grabbed the idea of lemming vs domino and having decided on lemming for entry and domino for exit, lost my place in the poem and an't seem to get...
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I'm feeling s1 but probably not the way you mean it. S2 and 3 are unfamiliar territory.this is my fav:missed the beautyof a fire red shell turning sandin its shadow to glasswow.-Deidre
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no worries.i threw in some technical stuff.doesn't help the reader, but it is what it is.thanks for dropping by and leaving kind and considered words.neil
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a q, enil - are the bold and non-bold parts meant to be read together but also as two separate poems?from east to west: c. crittenden, t. trendle, best of the net nomies & pj nights
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i'm starting to think that u are a little deaf, neil. or you just don't care about sound.i liked:"wind chimescool as cut emeralds..... "Going Deeper
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klein - you have already told me that you consider my writing to be "gurgling". i heard you the first time.
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your first paragraph reminds me of the sea gulls up here. they can be so beautiful when flying above the ocean - less so at the dump and they can be downright scary when they snatch a sandwich from...
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good evening, pj.this is just a spew.it was fun at the time ... what is it about?shoot, don't ask me.the bold was an idea i wanted to try inaddition to using white space.i have been told that it helps...
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i like spewfrom east to west: c. crittenden, t. trendle, best of the net nomies & pj nights
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